my long term feelings
dont last long
1 important thought enters
and another one goes
i can never hold on
to any of those
so im stuck without thinking
repetitve actions
cause my feelings dont last long
i wish they were stronger
i wish i was stronger
strong enough to see through the night
and be able to see, just 2 steps ahead
im stuck
tied to a branch
goin no where
cause these thauhts
dont last to long
i wish i was strong
my heart is so weak
my sight is blind
and i make 1 good choice
and 20 bad
i try to do right
but wheres that heart that i had?
when i was stronger
when i wasnt so weak
when life was always great
at deepest points
points of nothing
i was always so hopeful
yet now im not hopeless
i just need something
i need you
to lead me
through the night
aw what a good poem.I love how the reader can really tell through your poems how much you need and love this person.Theyre great.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I don't wish to sound critical, but is there an editor at this site who at least looks at what is published here and sent out to other members? What if a writer asks for help? Just wondering. It does say Poems and not 'critique, doesn't it? Thanks