Lilies Poem by sekharan pookkat

Lilies

Rating: 5.0


Images shade in the moonlight
Melting grief and agony in delight
Remembering the anguish words
Came from the lilies leaves
There passed me softly.
You grabbed like an absconding crab
Moving lastly on the shore
After a severe strike of a wave
I stood lonely in a dream
Pictured in purple blanket of a queen
I remember the day
You loved again.
Nothing in the world like you
When I prefer something new
Remembering the anguish words
Came from the lilies leaves
There passed me softly.

Thursday, February 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 09 February 2019

Beautiful imagery, passion and feelings of heart, the words painting a picture. I liked the piece.

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Unwritten Soul 05 November 2017

Beautiful poem, the passionate the innate expression through this lilies really obvious here....beautifully broken kind of piece, loved it. Thanks for inviting me reading this, of course i will write a comment, it is like a bookmark to honour every page we read and then. keep it up good work Sir.

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Sekharan Pookkat 06 November 2017

Inspiring words upholding peace friendship and harmony linked with fragrance of thought

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Susan Lacovara 18 April 2015

The picture you paint, with the brushstrokes beautiful words, although sad, so endearingly lovely. I can smell the fragrance of the lilly, from here.

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Sekharan Pookkat 18 April 2015

consoling words soothes me and I try to forgot the strikes of waves on the shore. I like your comment

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Hazel Durham 14 February 2015

Beautiful imagery with inspired lines about the agony of losing love!

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