Limerick-5-Fist Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Limerick-5-Fist

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Once I met Gattu with some nuts,
He was glutton was living in a hut.
He was taking food in tog like a nut,
In the way by police he was caught,
A fist hit his belly, did he say naught?

Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: funny,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Glossary
Nut – a hard-shelled seed
Nut – a crazy person
Naught – nothing
Tog - garment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 16 September 2015

Beautiful limerick with composition of magical words. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2020

Musing along with the nut! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful Limerick dear Sir....thank you for sharing... 16 Sep 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xA pleasant read as well dear Kumarmani... 16 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xWonderful limerick! 17 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xHahaha nice one! Pleasure to read, thank you for share! 17 Sep 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xAw ;)) xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings my dear friend tfs 18 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is brilliant. Thank you for sharing. 19 Sep 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xSuperb limerick, subtle worded. Thank you so much for this enjoyment. 19 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply

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Liza Sudina 21 September 2015

Unfortunately, police is cruel with poor people here too. they say in USA it is vice versa -they protect citizens not the powers.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 September 2015

Amusing indeed, Kumarmani Saab!

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Sanjukta Nag 16 September 2015

Ha ha! an amusing limerick. enjoyed it. thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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