For a few years
a black cloud has
rained on the farm of
my poetry
No plants grow
apart from little souls
wrestling with life
Soon they die
forgotten by their
readers who
don't care
who has written these black poems!
and why?
Without looking at the darkness
of the cloud flying from the east, saying:
They should be
less dark
for the sake of
the optimistic horizon
and the daylight's brightness
But the full clouds
still rain
on the farm of my poems
without stop
on the farm of my poems without stop.....beautiful to read this poem Poem not for the dark clouds of heart Poem not for the extravagant ink Poem not for the torrential devastation of love Poem articulates the enlightenment of poets inside.......
Dear Mahtab warmly welcomed generous commentary. cheers I hope all is well with you and those around you.
A great Poet could never stop writing what is in his heart otherwise he will be haunted until his last breath. An innate talent must flow like a river and the themes in mind whether it is dark, light or inspiring must come out and conveyed with the most beautiful verses.
This is a remarkable piece......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.
But the full clouds still rain on the farm of my poems without stop
You must continue to write those dark poems- -they were meant to be written how they were written and why they were written and when they were written! ! ! ! Life has its own ways to get our attention! ! ! ! And trying to get away from its edicts will cause your readers great loss. 10+++++++
Always your beautiful comments are encouraging me to write better, your views are important to me dear famous poet Rose Marie Juan-austin. have a nice time over there with kind regards
A beautiful poem full of powerful emotions. " A black cloud has rained on the farm of my Poetry." Wonderful lines from a wonderful poem. 10+++and to my Poem List.
Darkness! ! Black clouds up there. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
but your comment set the light in that darkness, awaiting more from you, thanks