Living With What Life Has To Offer Poem by mona martinez

Living With What Life Has To Offer

Rating: 5.0


frustation, anger, life,
must i say more,
all are becoming a pain,
would you agree,
you feel one way,
you start to feel another,
like emotions never seem to stop,
more like a rushing river,
can't really stop it,
but, have to live with it.

5-13-09

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nice, concise write, bringing your point across perfectly..

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Sandra Martyres 13 May 2009

How about optimism, good cheer and life for a change Mona....these are more positive emotions to focus on and the frustration will gradually disappear... otherwise nice precise write capturing your feeling eloquently 10 from me.

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