Loneliness Poem by Matloob Bokhari

Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


LONELINESS
I was sitting by the window of my house
With the company of healing silence, aromatic tea and fragrant air
Soul blossoming flowers, silver refreshing shower and sounds of nature
Everything looked beautiful
In the memory slant, I saw
Friend of my soul
Friends who came and passed away
My father, who is living in my heart
My heroes, who sold their lives to purchase peace
Crying children on red sand in sad night
In the cold wind of December
My eyes became wet
Every thing dimmed in the mist
Dimmed in my hot tears
In the window of my house
Me
Empty tea cup
Darkclouds
Sighing wind
Weeping sky
And loneliness

COMMENTS: LONELINESS
Cida Ribeiro Stevanato: His way of writing, invades the soul of those who read... brings many memories... this is very good! ! He is prince of the kingdom of thought.Thanks my friend Matloob Bokhari, good night dear
Amb Jann Gail Cole-LeBleuPoignant: Bonnee S Opp beautiful write...
Deepak K Choudhary: … So poignantly articulate, touching and soulful! Loved it...
Michele Vizzotti-White: The ending is so powerful love the shift from the way it started to the way it ended., I can see the imagery and the use of tea and tears, rain, flowers is great
Bonnee S Opp: beautiful write..
Debbi Kapp Brody: Very powerful…very imaginative
Iulia Gherghei Splendid
Malik Zafar exquisite:
کچھدردلاجوابہی
کچھمیںبھیبےمثالہوں
Bonnee S Opp: beautiful write..
Debbi Kapp Brody: Very powerful
Syedah Maryam Iqbal: Splendid! !
Annie Hilwani: Wonderful lines, it can illustrate your feeling well
Patricia Ross: Beautiful imagery❤️
Adil Mahmood: SIR SO TRUE.
Shareef Abdur-Rasheed: Active Now
Shareef Abdur-Rasheed: Bhai ﺍﻟﺴﻼﻡﻋﻠﻴﻜﻢوَرَحْمَةُاللَّهوَبَرَكَاتُه Amazing piece, simply beautiful. Alhamdulil'lah.
Sikander Hayat Bhatti: Excellent and pretty...
Irshad Ahmed Soomro: Excellent 👌
Drkk Mathew: Beautiful
Tauseef Akbar: Very nice.
Rashid Ahmed: kamalshairi ha
Tami Lee W: This is a very passionate & powerful poem, filled with such deep emotions. FULL OF PATHOS.
Katerina Rose de La'fontaine: POWERFUL, EXCELLENT EXECUTION....XX
Aamir Shahzad: Beautiful expression of tender feelings
Ishaq Malik: Very well expressed
Farah Naz Fatima Rizvi: Beautiful inscription
Sofyia Shah: WOW SO BEAUTIFUL POETRY
Annie Hilwani: Wonderful lines, it can illustrate your feeling well

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2019

Very impressive write, Matloob. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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