Treasure Island

bethany seed

(19 may / england)

Long lost time


long lost time
lost world's
lost...........
just everything
everyone
i have
i only have just only a bite of hope left in me
have you seen?
have you even tryed
to help me?
long lost time
lost world's
have started to come back to me
but are they the same?
have they change?
long lost time
lost world's
lost me
i tryed to
come back
but it hurts so much
long lost time
long lost world's
have found me
but for how long?
until i become
lost again
lost to everything and everyone?

Submitted: Tuesday, November 04, 2008
Edited: Thursday, November 13, 2008

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (11/18/2008 3:32:00 PM)

    long lost time
    lost world's
    lost...........
    wonderful expression of life drifting along tract of the time, yet introspective by the queries yet unanswered, superb write by the imagery,10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Blue Eyes (11/13/2008 4:11:00 PM)

    i love this poem especially the repeated use of the sound/s/ that refers to movement and confusion referring to being running to find he way out of the maze u r into. (Report) Reply

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