(20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

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Lost

Lost in a world, that scares me to death,
Lost in a crowd, I'm losing my breath.
Lost as a boy, lost as a man,
I need to grow up, don't think I can.

Lost as a person, can't find my way.
Lost in life, every day.
Lost in worry, who am I?
All my life, I've lived a lie.

Lost to kindness, lost to love,
Lost in a sky, like a new-born dove.
Lost in thought, which I shouldn't do,
It winds me up, I can’t get through.

Lost to comfort, all kind words,
Lost to advice, it isn't heard.
Lost to those who really care,
All these people, always there.

Lost in me, I need a break,
Lost in wonder, which road to take?
Lost in a place I don't know well,
Where are you now? There's no one to tell.

Lost here, all alone,
Lost apart from the mobile phone.
Lost still, there are no calls.
I'm struggling alone, to break these walls.

Lost in mind, lost in soul,
Lost memories, they're just a hole.
Lost family, lost mate,
Gone now, yet I'm full of hate.

Lost in a straight world, and I am gay,
Lost now, for what to say,
Lost in boredom, think I'll leave.
There's a lot in life I need to achieve.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 04, 2006


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  • Emily Wallace (2/17/2010 12:06:00 PM)

    this is a super good poem

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (6/17/2008 3:20:00 AM)

    The more desperate u are, more hopeful u become....nice write up

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  • Ira Nospmis (2/5/2008 8:49:00 PM)

    great poem, keep writing

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  • X X (2/4/2008 8:32:00 AM)

    This is my favourite line:
    'Lost as a boy, lost as a man, '

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  • just who i am (1/26/2008 9:29:00 AM)

    wow that brought a tear to my eye thats were i am lost and looking for a way out beautiful

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  • Autumn Keele (12/8/2007 1:55:00 PM)

    wow, that was AMAZING. I know exactly how you feel, what you are saying. wow.

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  • Sav Jamison (12/6/2007 5:05:00 PM)

    That poem just...wow...it got me interested.....Your a realy good poet.

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  • Tiffany Spivey (10/20/2007 9:08:00 PM)

    i think everybody has felt lost at one point and u have a skill to capture it in words

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  • Rachel T. (9/21/2007 12:21:00 PM)

    wow, this is an amazing poem. it really captures the way you feel, i hope you dont feel like this all the time, i used to be kinda lost with who i am as well. if u ever need anyone to talk to....im here
    -Rachael

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  • Rachel T. (9/21/2007 12:17:00 PM)

    wow, this is an amazing poem. it really captures the way you feel, i hope you dont feel like this all the time, i used to be kinda lost with who i am as well. if u ever need anyone to talk to....im here
    -Rachael

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