The distant echo
from the mountains high resounds!
Come and bless our land!
Come and bless our land. So pleasing sound to reduce the distance between mountains and echo. Wonderful drafting....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a good one, Elizabeth, but in classic haiku there are not exclamation marks.. try a '-' as a kireji, at the end of the 2nd line.. The distant echo from the mountains high resounds - Come and bless our land Cheers Fabrizio