Look Behind Poem by aric wilsie

Look Behind



Look behind
Hear the hiss
Fearing the serpent
Black eyes staring
Beady
From a white blanket
Almost drawn
Completely Dawn
Ing upon
transparency
Here is twitching
Possibly P
Aining into nothing
Where once was
Wencing
Witout such disaster
So quiet now
Uncertain a T
With woe
Sweet sad
True
Casting daily remembrance
Tall strong
And roaming
Black hair waving
Blue eyes dimming
Dead man
Ghost
Floating without tether
Only wanting to stay
So Un-
Surely
Needing to know
Care
Your care
Is constant
In absence
Wishing Wanting
Almost crying
Over
Choked up life
Mixed of
Loveless tender shame
One more day
One more night
Thankless
Forgiven even less
But
Hospitality
Hospital
Hospice
All mean the same thing
To the same man
At diffrent hours
If your going
I'm coming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 12 August 2009

quite a twister, really gripping in parts, the end is really good. Just watch out for typos.

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