The swirls of darkness
pull me under for a while.
When I find the surface
I have to correct all the wrongs
I have happened to create.
Forgive me.
I was not strong enough,
but your persistence
makes me realize
what I have forgotten
and given up on.
Rescue me prince.
Show me what I can live for
don't let me go under again.
Too many times
I have lost my way.
Falling,
but your hand is there
to welcome me back
up to the surface.
I'm glad you DIDN'T stop writing poetry like you said you were going to! Excellent poem. You have a way with words that creates meaning deeper than you may know. I appreciate your work. Keep it up!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem, short and sweet yet powerful. Good one