Lost Poem by C.S. Keskuela

Lost

Rating: 5.0


Lost
Drifting
Betweens waves and shore
Floating
Falling
Away from the world....
Into the deep I go

Unable to control
My descent
My desire
Oh, what have you done to me?

Drawn into the depth
Of your blue eyes
Soft, gentle
And oh so passionate!

My dreams are filled by nothing but you
Joined in passion
And beautiful tenderness
I awaken in your arms each morning

Only to realize...
you are not really here.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 December 2009

Well expressed, love is sometimes laughter or pain, sometimes is great at moment and then it changes, it seems that nothing remain the same...keep it up, if you have the time, please read my poem titled'WHEN LOVE IS GONE' you got my vote 10+++

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