Love Poem by sOoraj Pottekat

Love

Rating: 4.0


In my life I strived a lot
To find love, until I lost
Now I understand what is love
When you are hungry
A pice of cake is love
When you are sad
A loving look is love
When you are ill
A soothing touch is love
I remember the days with my granny
When I was palying
She called me to kitchen
And fed me something
When I was crying
She looked afterme
And told me not to cry
When my hand was broken
She touched on my forehead
And said it would be alright
Now i know what is love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 08 May 2007

The thoughts of love you have described in this poem is real my friend, it is love when something good happens to an individual. good write. a little improvementon spelling it could deserve a 10.

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