Love always falls - where it has to fall!
even if sometimes it seems that it is: un-true.
Even if 'no pleasure' they answer you!
she has pecked where the fish - has popped
and floats - a whirlwind that's colorful.
fall with her and with Christ- only if she responses you.
and response is there - where Commandment is full.
And righteous is what He said. And that what is - true!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Focused and factual. An insightful portrayal of mighty spiritual experience that is love, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Liza.