Philo Yan

Freshman - 675 Points (Malaysia)

Love At First Sight - Poem by Philo Yan

I dash across the busy streets,
One wet and cloudy day.
To buy myself some savory sweets,
I trip a clumsy way,
Plonk down on my fanny seats.

I look around from where I lay,
A man dashes across the busy streets.
He comes near me, eyes striking blue,
He speaks and says, 'Miss, can I help you? '

Stands over me, reach out his hands,
He pulls me up, from where he stands
A tall, dark stranger, man oh man!
Handsome devil, I am a fan!

He smiles, one thousand watt,
At least that's what I thought!
Is he my knight in shining armor?
Who knows, He could be a farmer!


What if it's destiny call?
Shall I pick up, take the call?
Shall I open or close the wall?
Oh my, blue eyes is really tall.....
Perhaps Love at first sight?
Perhaps I can be right.


To love someone is gamble,
To love someone can take a tumble,
If we find love to be a struggle,
That's not love, it spells trouble.

Copyright Philo Yan September 1,2012


Comments about Love At First Sight by Philo Yan

  • Freshman - 675 Points Philo Yan (9/13/2012 1:41:00 AM)

    Young Aung Si,
    Yet to discover,
    Many facets, love be,
    Happiness uncover.
    Thank you Aung Si
    Your comment, agree. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (9/13/2012 1:08:00 AM)

    Wow! Really really great poem.beautiful verses and beautiful rhymes.
    If we find love to be struggle
    That's not love, it spells trouble.
    I love this. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 12, 2012


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