Philo Yan

Freshman - 628 Points (Malaysia)

Silent Prayer Poem by Philo Yan


When things around seem not to work
When people you know don't seem to care
When you start feeling that you are dirt
Which way you turn, Life seemed unfair

It's time to pause for the deepest breath
Step back and walk in a sheet of rain.
Let the rain wash away the pain
Let the wetness roll down your face
Let the coolness soak into your hair
Slowly breathe in the freshest air
Feel the wind without a care
And with clarity, say a silent prayer.

Submitted: Monday, September 02, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 02, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (12/16/2014 6:20:00 AM)

    Good one] A walk in the rain and a silent prayer may make a big difference (Report) Reply

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