Philo Yan

Veteran Poet - 1,716 Points (Malaysia)

Silent Prayer - Poem by Philo Yan

When things around seem not to work
When people you know don't seem to care
When you start feeling that you are dirt
Which way you turn, Life seemed unfair

It's time to pause for the deepest breath
Step back and walk in a sheet of rain.
Let the rain wash away the pain
Let the wetness roll down your face
Let the coolness soak into your hair
Slowly breathe in the freshest air
Feel the wind without a care
And with clarity, say a silent prayer.


Comments about Silent Prayer by Philo Yan

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/1/2016 3:27:00 AM)


    Let the wetness roll down your face! With the pains of life. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (2/26/2016 3:54:00 AM)


    Let the rain wash away the pain
    Let the wetness roll down your face
    Let the coolness soak into your hair
    Slowly breathe in the freshest air..... and when the mind is clear. pray silently. wonderful was of thinking which brings peace , inner peace. tony
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  • Hans Vr (12/16/2014 6:20:00 AM)


    Good one] A walk in the rain and a silent prayer may make a big difference (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 2, 2013


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