Silent Prayer Poem by Philo Yan

Silent Prayer

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When things around seem not to work
When people you know don't seem to care
When you start feeling that you are dirt
Which way you turn, Life seemed unfair

It's time to pause for the deepest breath
Step back and walk in a sheet of rain.
Let the rain wash away the pain
Let the wetness roll down your face
Let the coolness soak into your hair
Slowly breathe in the freshest air
Feel the wind without a care
And with clarity, say a silent prayer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 17 June 2019

Let the rain wash away the pain Let the wetness roll down your face Let the coolness soak into your hair .../// beautiful poem; beautiful expression let all be the silent prayer for the peace for the love to live long together

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018

Sober reflection crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Philo and do remain enriched.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2016

Let the wetness roll down your face! With the pains of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 February 2016

Let the rain wash away the pain Let the wetness roll down your face Let the coolness soak into your hair Slowly breathe in the freshest air..... and when the mind is clear. pray silently. wonderful was of thinking which brings peace , inner peace. tony

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Hans Vr 16 December 2014

Good one] A walk in the rain and a silent prayer may make a big difference

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