Love At First Sniff Poem by Jemarie Ragudo

Love At First Sniff

Rating: 5.0


I looked at him
He licked his lips
I touched his hair
He kissed my hand
I hugged him
He smelled me
I called him, “Jack…”
He rubbed my legs
That was it!
I bought the dog!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
__ __ 08 June 2007

I LOVE IT it sounds just like me at the pet store!

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Jade Lee 30 July 2007

I like this one, it's so simple and yet has the ability to make me smile.

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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2018

Mutual affinity and instinctive liking are well captured in the piece. A lovely creation that resonates with vibration of reality. Thanks for sharing.

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Vipin Trisal 18 November 2007

wow...ppl these days don't think the way u think..unparallel wit......good one

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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007

Same thing, mine is a cat! Thanks for sharin, top mark.

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Yen Cress 11 October 2007

A delightful vignette, Jemarie! I love all kinds of critters, but dogs give so much love back, they are my first love!

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Lee Degnan 20 September 2007

If that all it takes, then I fell in love many many times just passing the pet store! ! I hope you and your furry friend have a great life together, and thank you for the great write... Hugs, Lee

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