, Love In A More Intense Way Poem by Louise Tredoux

, Love In A More Intense Way

Rating: 3.0


Enjoying my heart’s wish today, walked
on the beach, pristine white sand forming
a far horizon, wind whipping my hair into
total disobedience, walked all the way to
the rusty skeleton of an old ship, nostalgia
in the air, a cold-knife wind cutting through
my jersey, the water burnt my feet, the pain
made me feel alive, aware, the world is re-
created once again, sat down with my note-
book to record the adventures of Ernestine
my latest heroine, create a relationship with
an intensely angry man who will be changed
by her joie de vivre

Came home, frozen, Rudi waiting for me, read
my story in fascination, wanted to know which
part I would like to experience in reality so as
to describe my heroine’s life with more accu-
racy, I was delighted, what a valuable contri-
bution, I explained and he was game, now
love will never be the same for me, I have
added the dramatic adventures of an
Ernestine to my life and I love Rudi in
a new, more intense way!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 22 July 2009

a wonderful soliloquy and well expressed passion...lovely indeed...10

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Marieta Maglas 22 July 2009

nice narrative poem of love, fascinating monologue..........

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