Love On Sale Poem by Sadashivan Nair

Love On Sale

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Love was once on sale,
Long queue waiting their turn,
Buy one and get one free;
With notice 'terms and
Conditions apply';
Many went with cash
And many with credit card,
Failed to swipe,
And lost their chance;
Most failed to notice,
In the bottom of love packed
In smallest font,
'It's barter system
can't buy with cash,
Give one take two from us';

© sadashivan nair 

Sunday, August 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2023

Give one take two.... great! A fantastic poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 September 2017

.A nice poetic imagination, Nair. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Qiniso Mogale 27 August 2017

Very interesting. A great poem by all means. Well done dear poet

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