Love You Poem by Victoria Ayres

Love You



Don't call me Emo
Because I love you
Don't run away
Because I love you
Don't forget me
Because I love you
I won't hurt you
Because I love you
Don't die on me
Because I love you
Don't give in
Because I love you
Let me in
Because I love you
Never forget
How much I love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Bobster 09 November 2009

I loved this poem. The rhythm is so powerful like a beating heart. The repeated line sounds almost like a religious mantra. The twist in the last line caught me out too! I had to read it twice to see I had it straight. Very good in my opinion. thank you.

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