Make Me, Let Me Poem by Denn Meneses

Make Me, Let Me

Rating: 5.0


Make me the reason for
the sparkle in your eyes
the spring in your step
the ripple in your thighs.

Make me the source of
the smile on your lips
the racing of your pulse
the quiver in your hips.

Let me be the one who lets
your heart skip a beat
your blood stir in rapture
your temple throb in heat.

Let me be the only one
your whole being surrenders to.
Let me be the only love
you’ll ever know.

I’d like to bury my face
in your chest for always.
Would I finally be home
in your warm, tight embrace?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yonela Mali 19 August 2008

it is a beautiful poem indeed...

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 09 July 2008

Very good poem! Some lines suggest eroticism, very direct and also some suggestion of 'copulation'. Anyway the style of poem is explicitly sexual. Maybe this is part of your hidden or subconcious desire. Go for it! ! ! Well penned.

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Marvin Brato 08 July 2008

Clever write about love poem... it is very romantic indeed! Many will be waiting in open arms! A 10.

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