Make To-Days Look Like Trips To Mall Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Make To-Days Look Like Trips To Mall

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If desert's dry sands stretch all life,
Sail across the sea, take a stroll.
If joys flood, pockets prone to spill,
Recall sorrows, some grief and gall.
Ask moonless dark night how she feels
Shooting stars when shoot tongue-in-jowl.
Such be the truth of every life—
It lives until fate comes to call.
Balloon's bloated air be all joys,
And grief oh an over-done doll!
Long miles to make and falling short,
Try stretching limits, small and tall.
Why worry for morrows at all,
Make to-days look like trips to mall.
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Ghazals | 03.11.16 |

Friday, April 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: carpe diem,today
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A ghazal is a set of five or seven couplets linked like a bouquet. The topics could be different, yet there is an underlying theme. All the second lines of the couplets have a common rhyme.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 05 April 2019

Long miles to make and falling short, Try stretching limits, small and tall..../// well expressed

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 April 2019

Ghazals originally were in Urdu, then in Hindi, and now a days I see them in Gujarati. It is hard to use English as the medium for this genre. I would be thankful if you or any other reader have any comments on this. Meanwhile thanks for liking this Ghazal, Mahtab Bangalee.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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