Man And The Ocean Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Man And The Ocean

Rating: 5.0


The ocean submits
To the power of the wind
Man is swept away
By the power of the flesh
And lure of material wealth.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 29 January 2020

True and perfect. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 January 2020

Reminds me of the teaching of our Lord Jesus Christ: “Watch and pray, that ye enter not into temptation: the spirit indeed is willing, but the flesh is weak.” [Matthew 26: 41].......10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 January 2020

Ah, what a beautiful coincidence! I said something in response to your next poem on ocean, and here it is. You say the same thing in your own inimitable style. Lovely.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2020

Wind is the mind. Ocean waves desires. Insightful metaphoric piece 10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 February 2020

Man is swept away By the power of the flesh And lure of material wealth.. comparing it with the ocean.. great imagination and truth of life. tony

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Nabakishore Dash 16 May 2022

Man---------wealth.'A great truth revealed in your poem Madam Marie.

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Soran M. H 26 August 2020

power of the flesh And lure of material wealth.

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Soran M. H 26 August 2020

always there are conflicts between human and nature, and between human and human; but in the end the wiser would be the winner..very attractive theme accompanied by a wonderful poetic imagery, have a top mark and it goes onto my fav list...well done Dear Poet Rose ***full stars***

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Shaun Cronick 18 July 2020

and avarice walks hand in hand in the mind and body of man. Foolish men will never learn for they are weak and defenceless. 10+ and many thanks Rose Marie for telling it how it is.1o+ and take care.

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Sandra Feldman 27 March 2020

Weak is the flesh! But not your poetry, dear Poetess of truth and beauty!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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