Maturity! Poem by Namratha Swamy

Maturity!

Rating: 5.0


The wind is ticklish as long as it is a breeze
The clouds are fluffy before the rains weigh them down
The soft rain drenches the soul before turning to a thunderstorm
The blooms are tender before the sun dries them out
Love when new is dreamy, rosy, tender and immature
Life with its share of blows brings in maturity to that tenderness!
The older the mountains get, the more stronger they become
The deeper the ocean gets, the more intriguing they seem
Likewise, the older the love, the deeper, calmer, less demanding, more comforting it feels!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 02 April 2024

The clouds are fluffy before the rains weigh them down The soft rain drenches the soul before turning to a thunderstorm--An amazing poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2023

The soft rain drenches the soul before turning to a thunderstorm......nice inscription. So touching.. Beautiful poem.

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Sheeya Hacks 26 June 2023

Excellent sum-up line 'the older the love, the deeper, calmer, less demanding, more comforting it feels! ' Full *****

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Congratulations on this poem having been selected as Poem Of The Day Members. A most deserving recognition.

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