Post more comments
Want a gift card for being active Forum member? Post comments and win $25 gift card every week.
Rules: will be giving away gift cards (worth $75 in total) every week to first three members ($25 each) who participate most in our forum discussions. You just have to post comments on forum pages, poet pages or poem pages anywhere inside
Comments posted needs to be in different pages. Posting more than 1 comment on the same page will only be counted once.
Members can not post comments without being logged in. has the right to cancel or edit this contest. has a right to disqualify or ban member(s) without providing any type of reason, belief or proof in regards to any type of illegal activity or fraud.

Norden Lama

(26 april 1990 / Mangan, north sikkim)

Melancholy-an intense feeling of sadness...

This time I lose my every thing.
My patience, my persistence
Because I think, you were something,
I never wish to lose.
For when I was loving you, I was dedicating my true self,

But now as you can see,
Despite encoding you with every honest intimacy,
I fall to lose you.
I thought only death would make us apart.
How could I forget you behold a girly heart.
That can change unpredictably,

And now I am to cry every night.
I have gone thin and I cannot win,
Even a single loaf of bread for a day.
Ocean vast life awaits me…
I am to give up.
With you it would have been otherwise.
Every taste has turned sour,
Every relationship bitter.
I can’t sustain this heart break.

Crying seems nothing.
I crave for you all the time.
I haven’t turned the lights on,
My misfortune, I couldn’t tell you,
The way I was missing you.

Times have changed now…
I continue with my woes.
I cry alone and no body knows.
I wish to hear you all the time,
Wish to tell you I am not fine.
But as you are gone,
I am left alone to mourn.
The night seems too vast.
I wish my warranty no longer to last.
Because this time, the damage cannot be calculated.
I see my cell phone inbox,
It has been empty for long,
I sit and figure out the wrongs from my side.

How can you let me cry like this?
How much can you see me hurting myself like this!
The cranes are gone for the next season.
I am crying with same old reason.
I can’t even express that how much helpless I am.
The paths I walk don’t mean anything to me.
Ever since I have lost you,
I have lost myself too.
My principles are all gone in a hush,
I happen to lose you in rush.
And it seems you never thought about me…

Submitted: Monday, April 25, 2011
Edited: Thursday, May 19, 2011

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Melancholy-an intense feeling of sadness... by Norden Lama )

Enter the verification code :

There is no comment submitted by members..

Top Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. Invictus
    William Ernest Henley Updates

New Poems

  1. To You, With Love, Fareez Nasir
  2. For smooth sailing, Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  3. Genuine respect, Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  4. Let go of my wrist!, Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  5. A sweet dream..., PARTHA SARATHI PAUL
  6. She is I, Shweta Nair
  7. Poetic Sleeping Habits ~there are none, LUVinThe NOW
  8. Passing No Judgement, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  9. An odd adventure...., PARTHA SARATHI PAUL
  10. Falling Leaves, RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Poem of the Day

poet Algernon Charles Swinburne

I hid my heart in a nest of roses,
Out of the sun's way, hidden apart;
In a softer bed than the soft white snow's is,
Under the roses I hid my heart.
...... Read complete »

[Hata Bildir]