Memories Of Bundanoon: The Farmer's Carry Poem by Greg Davidson

Memories Of Bundanoon: The Farmer's Carry

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He grips the weight,
Bent at the knees,
And waits for the whistle blow.

He lifts his head
And feels the strain,
Starter blows the whistle. Go!

Staccato steps,
And shortened stride,
He toddles off toward the peg.

Momentum high
He rounds it wide,
Then charges down the second leg.

It's clear, the strain
Writ on his face,
As muscles in his arms cry out.

Now watching close
The crowd around,
For encouragement give shout.

The second peg,
Around he goes,
As slowly his momentum flags.

He stops, the leg
But half complete.
Weights drop to ground. He sags.

Cheers from the crowd.
Again he bends,
Pain writ clear upon his face.

The crowd now stands.
He totters on,
Slow at first, he gathers pace.

Stride resolute,
Eyes fixed ahead,
Determined that he will not stop.

Then from the crowd,
A victory cheer.
Weights and knees and shoulders drop.

The whistle blown,
The time is checked,
Exhausted now, his day is done.

A lesson then for all of us,
To learn from how the race was run.
It's not the treasure at the end we win,
But the measure of the race within.

Sunday, November 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,moral teachings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Bundanoon is a small village about 100 km south west of Sydney. Each year it is the venue of a Highland Gathering when 'Bundanoon is Brigadoon'. This poem is one of two (for now) which grew from memories from my attendance at the games over several years. This poem describes an event of strength and stamina held during the games.
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Greg Davidson

Greg Davidson

Sydney, Australia
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