Treasure Island

mary das

(13.10.66 / Malaysia)

Miserable thought

Gloomy kind of feelings
suddenly came....
lingering into my mind
darkening my today
darkening my thoughts
I realise....
it's the thought of you
I was alive yesterday
it's the thought of you
that kills my today
it's the thought of you
I hate you for today
it's the thought of you
I am dead today.

Submitted: Monday, October 30, 2006
Edited: Saturday, October 30, 2010

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  • marvin brato (10/15/2007 5:33:00 AM)

    Maybe you hate yourself for loving the person, the reason why the thought of him cannot get out from your mind! What can you do if he is not you type yet your heart crave for him. Or, he may have done you wronged yet you still long for him. True love it is! Thanks for sharing, top mark. (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (12/9/2006 11:15:00 AM)

    This poem certainly evokes strong negative feelings, though leaving it a mystery as to why? Whatever the case, certainly just the thought of this person is enough to ruin the day. Well done, Mary!
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (10/31/2006 5:23:00 AM)

    This sounds like infatuation on the spur of a moment. This kind of love and hate style is present almost in every woman. (Report) Reply

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