Moments Don't Pass But Years Do Poem by Sagorika Chakraborty
Moments Don't Pass But Years Do
Moments don't pass
But years do
I let go off time
Its peaceful
The timelessness
I travel
At my own pace
It ain't slow
It ain't fast either
It's mine
And it's perfect
Stilled
Lived
Cherished
For each year
When I turn in another year
I realize
Moments don't pass
But years do...
So true, the moments we have along the years never fade away! Great poem! Thanx for sharing!
So true, the moments we have along the years never fade away! Great poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/10/2024 4:49:22 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Sometimes a moment can be more difficult to get through rather than a whole year. Interesting poem. __________ P: S: There are couple of things that I would like to point out however Fisrtly, you used 'I' in small rather than capitalising it... Is that a stylistic effort on your part? ? Even if it is perhaps you may avoid it, I would suggest. Secondly, in the lines - 'Its mine And its perfect' Were you trying to say 'It is mine/ And it is perfect'? ? In that case it should be 'it's' - 'It's mine/And it's perfect.' _____________ Either ways, the poem was good.. Thanks for inviting me to read your poem... Cheers :)
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Thnx fr the inputs... Will make the necessary changes... P.S. Too much of texting has really hit the spellings hard