Moments Of Ecstasy 2 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Moments Of Ecstasy 2

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You spilled a beam of air
Cool, but full of warmth
At my earlobes, as usual you do!
I felt your essence
Almost of those days
While you laid
Your whispering lips coo...! !

I was then talking of that lass
Far from the north horizon-
Who made such a barter of things!
To have me as her hub of life
She would exchange all her wealth
If I planted a kiss on her nude
And share my life and path for her wings! !

Friday, April 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 27 July 2016

To have me as her hub of life She would exchange all her wealth If I planted a kiss on her nude And share my life and path for her wings! ! Such a wild proposal shared in between, that too without my knowledge? Kidding, Thanks for the poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

I felt your essence! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 May 2016

You spilled a beam of air Cool, but full of warmth At my earlobes, as usual you do! I felt your essence Almost of those days While you laid Your whispering lips coo...! ! Felt as if someone new was trying to intrude into your life. Was there any such event, Sir? Will you somehow describe? However the poem is beautiful. Thank you for sharing the poem.

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Tom Billsborough 22 April 2016

So many slip by but the memories remain. I liked this one very much. Tom Billsborough

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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