Monument Poem by Ernest Makuakua

Monument

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monument of my heart
monument of my mind
monument of my life has fallen

Its too sensitive
its too broken
I cant reach it
i can only feel my heart drowning
in the needles it falls
now the pores the holes the teeth

monument of my heart so far so near
so i fear

Monday, April 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernest Makuakua 05 May 2016

Yes that is true thanks for the comment

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Hazel Durham 04 May 2016

With deep emotions shattered into pieces, a broken heart is captured in your poem with clarity and beauty!

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