Rene' Bennett

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Mother - Poem by Rene' Bennett

Mother, I miss you. I still call your name.
Since you've been gone, I'm not the same.

Mother, I need you here with me
or me with you which has to be.

Mother, this pain goes so deep
I cry day and night and scream in my sleep.

Mother, please make it go away
Make it stop. Somehow, someway.

Mother, I'm sorry I cried a tear
yearning you, wish you were here.

Mother, come take my hand
guide me to that promise land.

Mother, yes, I long to be
asleep with you, eternally.


Comments about Mother by Rene' Bennett

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Kee Thampi (3/8/2015 11:12:00 AM)

    a emotional poem touches my soul..... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Willy Shaw (2/1/2008 9:05:00 PM)

    your poem touched my heart i just lost my mom 1week, and1 day ago january 24,2008 i miss her badly, and wonder how do i go on. everyone says it will get easier, but i don't see how, i'm feel lost, and confused. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Margaret Brown (10/11/2007 9:40:00 AM)

    I just wanted to say..This poem really touched my heart..I lost My Mom on Aug 3,2007 and This Poem really tells it all...I feel the way the poem is written...I miss her So Much..it's hard to think about living the rest of my life without my Mom..Thank you for writing such a truthful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brenda Wilkinson (7/28/2007 9:20:00 PM)

    your poem really touched my heart I lost my mom when I was only 14.My mom was the only person to truely care for me.With her gone I feel so lost. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tha Mystic One (3/2/2007 12:18:00 PM)

    Your poem is absolutely beautiful! My mother died when I was 9. So this poem really touched me, as I can relate. It put the pain I feel, poetic words. Thank you so much! Please write more poems. U truly have a gift for expressing words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rani Geeta (2/23/2007 12:07:00 PM)

    ur poem is very touching to me because my feelings are same to u (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 24, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 18, 2010


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