Moving on is the hardest
thing to do after a
break up from the person
you truely love more
than your own life
nothing else helps not crying
not even laying around
not even hiding in your
cold little room will help
just move on its better that way
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like it. Its emotional, but its as if you're trying to help other people too. =) But I would reccomend that you change the word 'hard' at the end of your second line. The repetition is kinda grating and halts the flow. But other than that, its good! ! =D