Moving Too Fast Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Moving Too Fast

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Life is so beautiful,
It's no justice when
We rush through
As if in a whirlwind.
Relationships are meant to
be savoured.
To rush into means there's a
Slight chance you might miss
An important fact.
To savour each moment is
As eating a strawberry ice cream
Slowly.
Moving too fast takes away
The richness of what could be.
It pays to take time to
See, smell, taste, hear, and feel.
To do this opens the door
For genuine appreciation.

Saturday, August 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,relationship,senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2017

Life is so beautiful! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jeanette Telusma 03 September 2017

Agreed, and thanks for commenting.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2017

Owo! What a beautiful poem it is. As life is brautiful due to good relationship we should not be rushed, we should progress slowly. Dear Jeantee, you have painted this here nicely. Let me quote some lines for our savour. .. To rush into means there's a Slight chance you might miss An important fact. To savour each moment is As eating a strawberry ice cream Slowly. Moving too fast takes away The richness of what could be. It pays to take time to See, smell, taste, hear, and feel. To do this opens the door For genuine appreciation. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 03 September 2017

Your kindness is appreciated, thank you.

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Lamar Cole 26 August 2017

Very nice poem. Very true about relationships are meant to be savored.

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Jeanette Telusma 26 August 2017

Thanks for your kindness and comment, Lamar. Stay blessed.

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