Mr Greedy - Ο Κυρ Αχόρταγος Poem by Kostas Lagos

Mr Greedy - Ο Κυρ Αχόρταγος

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Mr Greedy tried to eat a cloud

In front of a curious crowd

He climbed a ladder tall

'Til he began to fall

Now he is buried in a shroud





Ο κυρ Αχόρταγος θέλησε σύννεφο να φάει

Μπρος σε κοινό φιλοθεάμον κίνησε να πάει

Ψηλή ανέβηκε σκαλωσιά

Ώσπου έπεσε στη δημοσιά

Τώρα πια μόνο ραδίκια ανάποδα μασάει

Friday, August 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: greed,nonsense
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 14 August 2020

well done for such a clever idea and topic, the metaphor here is working very well, thank you for been so good poet,10+ and onto my fav list, keep writing and stay blessed, send all people around you my warm greeting dear friend ***Kostas***

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Soran M. H 14 August 2020

Mr Greedy tried to eat a cloud

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

Dwarf Can't reach the moon Greed Can't enjoy ultimate sweet of journey

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M Asim Nehal 14 August 2020

Ha ha ha....Useless try. The greed let him to the grave. Wise and witty as usual,10+++++

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Bharati Nayak 29 August 2020

Mr Greedy tried to eat a cloud In front of a curious crowd - - - - A lovely Limerick- - Mr.Greedy always tries to eat cloud causing his downfall.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2020

Creed of life should be with the truth! ! A greedy ends up in a sad situation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 August 2020

Good nonsense limerick dear poet, and nice to read your poems after a gap.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 August 2020

Greediness will pull you down to darkness. An amazing limerick imbued with wisdom and humor.

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Soran M. H 14 August 2020

Now he is buried in a shroud

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