Toheeb Tiamiyu

Rookie - 55 Points (Lagos state, Nigeria)

My 18th Birthday


Oh! On my birthdate,
On my 18th birthday,
When I will be
Now an adult.

On my 18th birthday,
A house will I buy
And stock my cupboard
With lovely clothes and shoes.

Oh! On my 18th birthdate,
I will give gifts,
Millions of good gifts
To the poor beggars.

Oh! On my 18th birthday,
I will travel to space,
And eat on the moon,
With alien friends up there.

On my 18th birthday,
I will find myself,
A damsel
And get betrothed.

Oh on that date,
I will party, dance non-stop.
With the world president.
Oh my 18th birthday!

These was I thinking,
When I realized,
Its just the tomorrow
After the next tomorrow.

Submitted: Thursday, July 19, 2012

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (8/4/2012 1:22:00 PM)

    I love it, I just love it Toheeb and I so believe you have done all of this just by writing it, you have been to all the places and done all those things. Happy Birthday Toheeb! ! Love and Light (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/19/2012 4:46:00 AM)

    A damsel
    And get betrothed.
    What a wish! I enjoy reading your poem. Happy 18th Birth Day. Welcome to adulthood! (Report) Reply

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