Pintu Mahakul

Silver Star - 3,598 Points (Gandam, Deogarh district, Odisha, India)

My Age Is Melting - Poem by Pintu Mahakul

I do not know why is my age melting?
Definite one thing my mind is setting.
Surely one source, which is helping?
Unseen but true in my heart nesting.

I am away from hurdle and pelting,
His knowledge is here is sure belting.
He protects us from sin by netting,
By his grace truly I am boon getting.

He is my beloved one ever telling,
Chirp my knowledge dear in yelling.
His essence everywhere, well smelling,
He brings in twist lips nice smiling.

In memory in my eyes ‘wetting,
Everywhere his rays I am getting.
I am feeling here his lovely petting,
In his memory I am ever nesting.

As per his commitment he is coming,
With love Sweet children he is calling.
Speaking you truth I am never jesting,
For my beloved, my age is melting.

Towards ocean like river I am flowing,
With flame like fire I am glowing.
Passing through beds of stone, now welling,
In between eye brows I am dwelling.

Oh my dear hear, my age is melting,
My hope and visions all are tilting.
Supreme father calls in time's twisting
He is testing, truly my age is melting.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Although unseen but it is true that beloved Supreme father exists and comes on earth for greeting and giving his valuable knowledge to his beloved children. During time's twisting in the definite end of a circle he gives his valuable support for mankind for transformation. While a soul knows and understands this fact and realizes God's presence starts acquiring knowledge about him and acquires his grace by participating in God's duty which a soul considers his melting of age towards truth to unite with beloved father while he comes and calls all as oh dear sweet children. At this time a soul sings that his age is melting like the flow of river and to unite with ocean so far. This is the theme of this poem. This is written in a special occasion in Brahmapur, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of world.

Comments about My Age Is Melting by Pintu Mahakul

  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Heather Wilkins (8/17/2014 7:00:00 PM)

    a beautifully written poem, And I do agree with you also my age is melting (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 16, 2014


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