Neela Nath Das

My Anonymous Valentine - Poem by Neela Nath Das

The far-off wind
won't let me sit.
I feel the storm
with my heart-beat.
Some leave their home,
some encourage me.
What is truth,
I can't even see.
I close window,
and shut the door,
but can't stay now,
here anymore.
The pain, the ache,
the scar, once made,
give me wound
leaving me dead.
The silence indoor
shout herein,
is piercing me like
a sharp pin.
I confess, you
have won my mind.
You anonymous,
don't stay behind!

Comments about My Anonymous Valentine by Neela Nath Das

  • Rookie - 16 Points Rahul Sharma (2/23/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    Confused...! ? ?
    Just break in...! !
    : -) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,968 Points Sekharan Pookkat (2/16/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    You anonymous,
    don't stay behind!

    I open the window for you
    To have fresh air and the blue sky (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,160 Points Neela Nath Das (2/16/2014 3:56:00 AM)

    Thanks Sawanji.But I didn't write 'gave'.It was give always there.I used pin to have rhyme with herein.Anyways, after writing a poem we should not leave P.H without noticing our typo or any kind of mistake.Thanks again for your superb comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Sawan Dhyani (2/15/2014 11:33:00 PM)

    Although I enjoyed reading your poem, I would like to point out some errors/suggestions: -
    *I close the window
    *gave me wound
    *a thousand pin/ thousands of pin
    Good write by the way! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 16, 2014

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