Neela Nath


My Anonymous Valentine


The far-off wind
won't let me sit.
I feel the storm
with my heart-beat.
Some leave their home,
some encourage me.
What is truth,
I can't even see.
I close window,
and shut the door,
but can't stay now,
here anymore.
The pain, the ache,
the scar, once made,
give me wound
leaving me dead.
The silence indoor
shout herein,
is piercing me like
a sharp pin.
I confess, you
have won my mind.
You anonymous,
don't stay behind!

Submitted: Saturday, February 15, 2014
Edited: Sunday, February 16, 2014

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Comments about this poem (My Anonymous Valentine by Neela Nath )

  • Rookie Rahul Sharma (2/23/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    Confused...! ? ?
    Just break in...! !
    : -) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,120 Points Sekharan Pookkat (2/16/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    You anonymous,
    don't stay behind!

    I open the window for you
    To have fresh air and the blue sky (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,217 Points Neela Nath (2/16/2014 3:56:00 AM)

    Thanks Sawanji.But I didn't write 'gave'.It was give always there.I used pin to have rhyme with herein.Anyways, after writing a poem we should not leave P.H without noticing our typo or any kind of mistake.Thanks again for your superb comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sawan Dhyani (2/15/2014 11:33:00 PM)

    Although I enjoyed reading your poem, I would like to point out some errors/suggestions: -
    *I close the window
    *gave me wound
    *a thousand pin/ thousands of pin
    Good write by the way! (Report) Reply

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