My Better Thoughts Poem by ion untaru

My Better Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


My better thoughts
All toghether, a flock of ewes
Revolted under the sun
And a different pasture

Haunted by questions
I do not recognize myself
A sweet smell of musk
Climb the mountains without stairs

Only anxieties collapse
old beliefs. Apostille
Zodiac signs which I
Am waving like a cloth

And the sand flow. Dawn
Suggesting me lively,
And hasten under shell
In spinning flax, shiver,

Good thoughts, bad thoughts,
Twisted by vortex
And hidden as a haulm,
Cleaned of sequelae

(translated from romanian)

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Marieta Maglas 12 November 2009

Twisted by vortex wonderful meditative poem 10++

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