My Blue Little Star Poem by Susheela Alexiose

My Blue Little Star

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My Star, my Star, my blue little Star,
That came to adorn my life,
which was altogether forlorn,
rejected and abandoned

I was mesmerized by your love
And fancied moments spending with you.
You bought me into a world,
which was entirely new to me.

I loved you with a love,
That my heart couldn't hold,
my mind couldn't contain,
I fell in love with you intensely

Until that thick cloud came
Took you out of my sight
And you went happily,
Leaving me alone in this dark world.

I waited for you, my blue little Star,
looking up to the sky so high
This time of grieving has kept me growing
As I accept this transition in my life!

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2019

I loved you with a love, That my heart couldn't hold, my mind couldn't contain, I fell in love with you intensely.sad to hear that your lover went away from you..... and you are longing for him in your life. very nice poem immersed in love. tony

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Anjana Nair 20 February 2019

Really a beautiful poem, very touching and impressive...! !

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Sandra Feldman 19 February 2019

Beautifully sad and very tender. It's incredible what the color blue can do for a poem when it is so lovingly and so poetically used. Excellent work!

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