Joseph Narusiewicz

Bronze Star - 2,575 Points (9/29/50 / So St Paul, Minnesota)

My Brother Loved Hendrix - Poem by Joseph Narusiewicz

Can I reach for you like a palm tree?
Moonlight on this sea of dreams
He had a letter in his fatigues
Dead at twenty two
My romance is heavy
My poetry edgy
The cold wind never seems gone
Baby maybe some things don’t go
I just can’t shine like the dawn
Too many clouds
The letter in his pocket was from me
I loved the way Hendrix played the blues
All these stairways crossing
These young graves
Wait a minute some things wrong
We all know some things wrong
Machine Gun gritty as a battlefield
My brother loved Hendrix


Comments about My Brother Loved Hendrix by Joseph Narusiewicz

  • Gold Star - 31,888 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/6/2014 10:58:00 PM)

    good writes and it is nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,687 Points Bri Edwards (6/24/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    are you 'taking' the same stuff hendrix was takin'? thanks for sharing, but, again, it is a bit beyond me. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 82 Points Scotty Dogg (1/11/2012 4:39:00 PM)

    I loved that double album, can't remember the name of it. Good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sam Aleks (12/16/2011 4:13:00 PM)

    good writes are surprizingly rare around here, this is fantastic. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 17, 2011


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