My Dream Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

My Dream

Rating: 5.0


I am just immersed in a pond
The depth of which scares me not
For towards its edge of life I could swim
And river is my solicitude
Its flows, its currents, its roller coaster
Oh how romantic it would be
And ocean is my dream
Unto which wonderful fathom
I would love to dive deep
And die peacefully

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2019

Oftentimes we dream of the unreachable. The deepest of the ocean is always a mystery that pulls us to conquer. A poem of great depth and thought provoking. Wonderfully written.

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Many many thanks Rose Marie.....I am humbled

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2019

A well crafted piece....10++++

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Many many thanks Bernard.....I am humbled

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