My Father - 1 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Father - 1

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Oh Papa...
You passed away!
Away from our
Old worlds of disillusionment,
Away into your
New world of detachment.

You shall be wedded
To the familiar world
Of my departed mother !
To the set frames again
Of my old fashioned mother ! !
To the nascent tides
Of a timeless vast ocean!
To the void lanes
Of memories and unspelt verses ! !
To the marvels
Of never-ending silence, and
Of everlasting chaos in you,
To the unrelished desires
Of your nonexistent body..
Of your realms, result less attempts,
Of your unproved theorems about life.

I have no words to describe
The lyrics of your unsung songs,
The cantos of your unspelt tongue,
The melodies and harmony in lives -
That you planted around you and us....
I have no words nor guts
To describe the incarnation
That was you.

Sunday, June 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: father
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 06 December 2017

That you planted around you and us.... I have no words nor guts To describe the incarnation That was you. Good poem with so nice reverence..Thanks for sharing it.. 10++++ Rani

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 February 2018

Thanks dear Rani for the beautiful remarks and encouragement.

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Prativa Rani 06 December 2017

That you planted around you and us.... I have no words nor guts To describe the incarnation That was you. Good poem with so nice reverence..Thanks for sharing it..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 February 2018

Thanks dear for the beautiful remarks and encouragement.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 September 2017

two suggestions if you accept COMBINE ALL 5 OF FATHERS POEMS AS ONE. FIRST LETTERS not to be Caps Second why those unnecessary exclamation marks i wonder Hope i have done my sincere duty as directed God bless thee poet. I always say help any poet improve we all are not perfect else we will not be able to compose more We still strive on Thanks Read some more of mine any first 50 I want to publish with good comments no BUTTER ONLY PLEASE i LOVE frankness thanx

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Thank you friend, Thanks for the beautiful remarks and these inspiration.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 04 July 2016

You shall be wedded To the familiar world Of my departed mother! To the set frames again Of my old fashioned mother! Beautiful ode to papa. Thanks for sharing it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Thank you Rini, Thanks for the beautiful remarks and these inspiration.

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Sabita Sahoo 30 June 2016

To the nascent tides Of a timeless vast ocean! To the void lanes Of memories and unspelt verses Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Thank you , Thanks for the beautiful remarks and these inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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