My First Love Poem by Miemi Jamal

My First Love

Rating: 5.0


Far North his from
Long hair with beautiful ‘tash
Eyes light green like a deep lake
Skin that glows but never tans
Flush Red immensely instead

My First Love
Arrived in late night May
Left early morning in June
Was the best thing that happen that year
He brought me his heart
But left with mine

My First love
Caring forever giving
He was humble
He was calm
Full of passion but buried inside
He thought me love
of patience
of selflessness

Gave me hope
Gave me dreams
Gave me the best night sleep
In his arms in his warmth

My First love
Had tears at the first glance
Still in tears of the last glance
It’s the meaning of love
Realized when he was gone


I doubted enough
I toured enough
In vain I thought
he wasn’t enough too

Ignoring the blessing
I tried changing
I was naïve, immature
Forgetting to be thankful


My First love
Still I think of him
Still my heart weakens
Forever in debt
Forever am spoilt
Forever thankful
And Forever it remains
as first lovers we departed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 July 2011

A very impressive First Love experience that you will never forget, Why should you? That was your stepping stone into the World of Love, very beautiful experience! This romantic and captivating write brings me back memories of yesteryears and makes me smile! Your well penned and poignant write gives you away! 10+++ Keep inspiring the world my dear, you got what it takes to make through the Poetry World: TALENT! Love and Peace for always! ...

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