Alison Cassidy

Rookie (6th August,1945 / Melbourne, Australia)

My First Orgasm - Poem by Alison Cassidy

it wasn't
for want
of regular experimenting,
but somehow
I could never achieve
that blissful state that others
told me I'd definitely recognize.

I looked
in books,
but they were anatomical
and talked of labia and uteri
and eggs and swimming sperm
and weren't much use
at all.

I filled my mind
with images erotic
from well-thumbed paragraphs
in Portnoy's Complaint and Lady Chatterley,
but these served only to intensify
the awful realization
that I would never enjoy
the mind-blowing experience they all wrote about.

And it wasn't
that I didn't delight
in the act of making love
and feel intensely erotic sensations
in those places I imagined I should.
It's just that I knew that there was something more.

And then
you came along
and with obstinate patience,
placed your hand in just the right place
and stroked and rubbed and coaxed until
my body felt a new and pleasant sensation
that vaguely mirrored childhood in the bath

and slowly the sensation grew
until I knew
that something irresistable would definitely happen
and found myself without pretense
as my body writhed and squirmed
and screamed
in tantalizing ecstasy.

Thereafter, I did it regularly
After all, practice makes perfect...

Comments about My First Orgasm by Alison Cassidy

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (5/28/2010 2:47:00 PM)

    I can't believe I missed this when it came out and just spotted it searching through your titles! Oh well, diligence pays off! Wonderful honesty and humor here. -chuck (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (8/16/2009 1:25:00 AM)

    HEH! ! ! ! Heh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    what an exhilarating read this is Allie...............
    Great fun reading this one.... you didn't hold back anything did you...? ? ?
    Entertainment at its best! ! ! lolsss.....

    I honestly don't know what else to say...! ! ! ! ! !
    Loved this one..! ! ! and still feeling the aftereffects! ! ! I am glad that you finally got the feeling..

    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Roger Cornish (2/11/2008 3:20:00 PM)

    In addition.....
    My wifes first Orgasm was on a rough Bus ride..... bouncing her stuff about....
    How can I compete with a Double Decker?
    : -)
    Rogerx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Roger Cornish (2/11/2008 3:18:00 PM)

    And this gem tucked away on a faraway page......
    Allie's poetry just gets better!
    She never fakes it!

    Nice to have been there!

    Rogerxxx. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/23/2008 12:46:00 AM)

    Very nice, I'm not quite up to involving my first orgasm yet, but it involved the shower and some experimentation after a number of partnered failures.

    Effective poetry by the way!


    L&T (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Robert Howard (6/5/2007 5:16:00 PM)

    I've never had to aim a fire extinguisher at my computer before today. First time for that too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Cj Heck (4/10/2007 6:10:00 AM)

    Allie, this is sensational writing - gently erotic and seductive without being graphic - all the elements of good taste. Again, a sensational write.
    CJ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raymond Wright (4/9/2007 8:17:00 PM)

    Wow! Atta girl, Ali! Great Poem.
    ~Ray (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,975 Points Melvina Germain (3/27/2007 9:59:00 PM)

    Yes, I can relate here in all honesty, you go girl and keep telling it like it is. Fabulous poem.---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Dennis (3/5/2007 3:18:00 AM)

    Hmmm... food for thought there. Maybe.... na... couldn't be.... or could it.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (1/30/2007 7:25:00 AM)

    Real life, superbly exposed. You have conveyed this natural feeling of ectasy and desire with such honesty Allie. Real poetry that hits the spot! Justine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (1/19/2007 9:33:00 AM)

    Allie - I love this, it's so not you! ! But then, here you are peeling another layer of the onion! ! Fab! You do it in such a way that it's not crass.... merely sharing with us how it made you feel...... Well Done! ! And by the way, aren't they great? ? ? LOL! HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Brian Dorn (1/11/2007 2:13:00 PM)

    Certainly a bit of a risque' topic to tackle but you managed to mount it quite well. Great write, Alison... all in good taste and well done!
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gregory Gunn (1/11/2007 1:56:00 AM)

    I knew all my so-called valiant sexual attempts were in vain; sure all five of them sounded satisfied, but always was aware they were probably faking it. On a missionary position mission, yet unfortunately, the pleasure was all mine. Jerry has since given me pointers in the art of exact finger placement. The Jermeister has that special touch or so it would seem, to find the proper seam of eroticism.

    'Oysters are supposed to enhance your sexual performance, but they don't work for me. Maybe I put them on too soon.'
    ----Garry Shandling

    'My wife gives good headache.'
    ----Rodney Dangerfield (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Not a member No 4 (1/6/2007 6:17:00 PM)

    Pulsing with energy, highly visualisable, demonstrates admirable staying power, and builds to a very interesting climax. Great progression on display here within an all consuming structure. x jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (1/6/2007 4:54:00 PM)

    Windows! Windows! will somebody please open those windows...Phew it's hot in here
    That's better n, now where was I..I've gone dizzy..ah yes..that was really good
    Thanks...Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Esther Leclerc (1/5/2007 8:21:00 PM)

    I think your experience mirrors that of many women, Allie, and you've got right to the heart of the matter beautifully! Esther : ] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 237 Points Patrick Ladbrooke (1/4/2007 2:20:00 AM)

    Brave subject, well handled! Great poem.

    Patrick xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points jack russell (1/3/2007 4:11:00 PM)

    Woo Hoo! ! Touching the words (among other things) that many fear to broach...good for you, Allie! ! More 'real' poetry from you, yet again. I can't think of a more natural act or desire that most humans wish to experience, or, at least seek. An orgasmic 10 from me :)


    Jack :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (1/3/2007 3:59:00 AM)

    Phew! Allie, I LOVE this and I applaud you for writing it (I'm also fairly sure that every single woman who reads it will relate) . You go girl!
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 18, 2010

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