Our true love showed when we first lay eyes on one another.
when i saw her she was like a like day break inside a railway tunnel
Like the new moon, like a diamond in the mines
She made my heart beat in a now-now time signature
I treated her like my queen of my heart as
she treated me like her love that she was waiting
Eternity for me to sweep her off her feet.
As the day turned into night
Her eyes sparkled like lights along a new city
She lips pursed as if her breath
was too sweet and full for her mouth to hold
I told her 'You are the beautiful goddess of my heart'
For her, I would peel open the clouds like new fruit
Give you lightning and thunder as a dowry
I would make the sky she'd all of it's stars like rain,
I would clasp the constellations across your waist
And I would make the heavens your cape'
She start to becomes dizzy and felt
So near to heaven.
But I hold her close to my body
So we would watch the stars
And I would physically give her each and every one
After that night I knew that she was my first true love but
In a instant she was gone and away like
Wind blowing against dust from a abandoned mind.
I asked myself why did she leave my heart and soul
But I guess love doesn't last long but it last long enough
to crave more of it.
So if you have found your love
keep it close, make it last to your full efforts
And as long as possible because
you never know it only takes one night to fade away
This.....this is the best poem I've ever read. It's so sweet and thoughtful and just....she must've meant so much to you. That's just....wow im amazed lol Beautifully done -Tyease
I absolutely love your poem. Very beautiful and it seemed sincere. I like the words you chose to describe things too. Nicely done.
Ohmygod. That is one of THE sweetest poems I've ever read. I love it.10 from me! XD Keep writing Compton! Peace and love, Lexi
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully portrayed, best description of love I've read in a long time.