my Freedom, my Freedom
you saved me
you tore my chain
you detached the knots
you released my pain
you fixed the dots
thanks! thanks!
my Freedom, my Freedom
you’re my necklace
you’re my bracelet
my Freedom, my Freedom
I feel you, I think about you
you accompany me, you’re my Angel
my Freedom, my Freedom
I like to be your slave
your slavery makes me Brave
my Freedom, my Freedom
clearly you engrave
my responsibilities
precisely you surround
my extremities
my Freedom, my Freedom
you’re my massive concept
my imperative impulse
my Freedom, my Freedom
I respire you, you inspire me
{October 10,2009}
my freedom my freedom to enjoy the life which god gave masha allah
My freedom my freedom is an encoraging masterpiece. It rough, but bumpless. I really enjoy this read.
'...Your slavery makes me brave.' i love it. It's quite a masterpiece.
Again a great write, I take this as two meanings in one poem. I like the way you Freedom is your heart and soul to give you the courage and drive to go forward. I love you anology on this. Its a great write! ! ! ! 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my freedom my freedom.....#it is a very courageouvs poem and a master piece*