My Freedom(Sad) Poem by Poet of the River

My Freedom(Sad)

Rating: 4.8


I am standing alone,
Take me home,
And end this life of mine,
I have my knife,
I'll take my life,
And i wont mess up this time.
Against my skin,
The bleeding begins,
And the puddle starts to grow.
As the blood continues to fall,
I hear the call,
And like the light in my eyes i just go..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 December 2011

hear the call, And like the light in my eyes i just go... oh nice lines..10 you have to grow, with rivers flow line shine glow let with some one you go.......like it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Bella Hernandez 19 December 2011

wowz... amazing poem... something that i know Crimson Love would like... but for me i absolutely adore it... so much meaing and crying out for someone to come to you... ~Bella

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