My Friend, I Love You Poem by Michaela Tatualla

My Friend, I Love You

Rating: 4.9


To feel the soft breeze on my face
Is like the touch of your sweet embrace
To stare at the mountains so high
Is like your shoulder, where I used to cry

You've been my friend and my lover
You always guided me all over
You gave me the strength to hold on
And offer me so much admiration

The sound of your breath
Is like the sunrise and the sunset
It gives me joy and excitement
With a love that's so ardent

My friend, I love you
And I know you love me too
But please keep it a secret
To avoid ending up with regret

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 09 June 2009

Good work.........y keep it secret though........... beautiful work

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

Kinda makes you wonder about the last line, but that is not a sin as long as you know the purpose of the poem and its meaning. These things are contained in the writing and framework. Wonderful work. GW62

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Ency Bearis 29 August 2008

nice poem...great write.. Ency Bearis

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Louemile Escober 25 August 2008

are you the one in the poem? hehe, , nice poem.add a little more intensity

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Ibrahim Guadid 20 August 2008

Great poem full of heartfelt emotion.Congragulatio keep on sharing us your hidden love through Poetry! !

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