My Gratitute For Your Virtue (Sonnet) Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

My Gratitute For Your Virtue (Sonnet)



I would be standing alone with a plea
Like a frail structure in solitude,
If had not you helped me so nicely.
My heart is filled with humble gratitude.

When no one did appear to be mine
I was really alone among crowd,
Then you appeared as a silver line
Being so friendly, in the deep dark cloud.

Your sweet words, filled with real sympathy,
Soothed my heart and saved my sinking hope.
You helped me forgetting the tragedy
And encouraged me with strength to cope.

All these support made me obliged to you
And I can never forget your virtue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

I don't want to be too critical but the reading of this is very difficult. Some of the words don't match. The sentiment is lovely, its almost as if there is something lost in a translation. Greenwolfe 1962

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Vidyadhar ... 10 February 2008

Good one depicting the deep emotions

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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