My Life Without Me! ! ! Poem by hopeless 111

My Life Without Me! ! !

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my life without me
what it would be
Amazing, Sad
Happy , Worth
whatever it gonna be
i will not see
i may be there far away from here
but i may hear what people fear
Only feel or hear
Nomore interfear
First Day i go what it will be
Screaming, crying
tears may be
for the shock they see
everything change for me
but they will return back to their life
forget me, myself even if i was here
New world i have to face
everything is done there is noway
for previous life and its dream
their life without me
whatever it would be! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lola Hi 31 July 2009

yes we always must go on in life no matter what happined the subjects of ur poems shows a lot of intteligence from u and that poem is so nice and special great job

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 02 July 2008

i see a conflict between me and me. what else should i be free for whatever it could see. and they will go on to be without me.....

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